Haiku

Known as go-shichi-go (5-7-5) in my newspaper, it is a deceptively difficult form of literature. What could be easier than writing 5 syllables, then 7, then another 5? Almost as easy as writing a couplet, right? (Which I have never tried, but I am thinking it’s awfully difficult!).

The most famous Haiku poet I have heard of is Basho Matsuo (1644-1694). Here is a translation of one of his poems:

Temple bells die out.
The fragrant blossoms remain.
A perfect evening!

Every month in my newspaper, a different Haiku writer is featured. Some wrote centuries ago, and some only a few years ago. I am enjoying the brief glimpses of a delicate form of writing. Even to the point of attempting it myself. Brief rules of Haiku are: The 5-7-5 syllable rule, the poem must contain a reference to a season, and the poem must consist of two distinct (yet connected parts). Okay, go!

Train at the station,
Dark suits viewed through a pink haze.
New sun reflected.

It’s about the falling cherry blossom petals during rush hour at the station. The falling pink petals are amazingly beautiful, like pink snow. They even glitter in the sunlight. Too beautiful for a poor attempt at haiku.


Anonymous says:

Always tring to learn new things. I am proud of you.

Mom


T says:

Not bad Heather! Not bad at all!